Haiku and a Cup of Tea

  • The Best of It: Summer in St. Louis Edition

    The Best of It: Summer in St. Louis Edition

    1. Bastille Day!
    2. Ice cream at Ices Plain & Fancy and Clementine’s
    3. Calhoun County peaches (Technically Illinois, but close enough)
    4. The chicken panko burger on the Stew’s summer menu
    5. That almost every neighborhood has a Concerts in the Park series
  • Review: Psalms from the Badlands by Honsho McCreesh

    Review: Psalms from the Badlands by Honsho McCreesh

    Back in March, Hosho McCreesh sent me a copy of his book Psalms from the Badlands for potential review in Frogpond. Because these short-form poems are inspired by haiku rather than haiku in and of themselves, the editorial team decided not to review the book. We have a set policy of only reviewing work within the spectrum of haiku  (including senryu, haibun, and linked forms), but do not review poetry that falls outside of that. However, I appreciated Hosho’s book so much and admittedly felt bad about not including it, so as a compromise, I decided to post a review here. 

    Psalms from the Badlands by Honsho McCreesh. Albuquerque, NM: DrunkSkull Books, 2025. Available starting August 3rd, 2025, at https://www.hoshomccreesh.com/psalms

    On his website, Hosho McCreesh describes Psalms from the Badlands as “An expansive collection of 150 “psalms” or haiku-like, Japanese-style breath poems about the brutal and beautiful American southwest, with nature as the catalyst for deeper meditations on life, love, grief, loss, and, of course, death.” From poem 1 to 150, you can clearly see his awe of the Southwest, as well as his deep appreciation for haiku and related forms. For example, Poem 21 reads:

    The woman’s hands,
    watching them peel chile,
    the way it still burned days later
    in the sunlight—

    still burns
    years later
    in your mind

    In my notes, I indicated how close this poem came to a haibun (a prose poem that ends in a haiku). Other poems invoke the long linked form of renku, even in their brevity, such as Poem 80:

    Fingers of late spring fog,,
    burnt off by morning.

    Early July monsoons,
    the sunflowers drink deep.

    Brittle October stalks,
    every drop baked out.

    And still it returns
    as January snow.

    Beyond their connection to the haiku world, this collection does an exceptional job of capturing the landscape and atmosphere of the Southwest in a visceral way. I particularly appreciate that the human element is not removed from these poems, as we are as much a part of the environment as the animals, plants, and weather. Poem 25 is one of my particular favorites in this regard:

    Red chile ristra
    cleaned of harvestmen
    & their cobwebs.

    Water boils
    red as a
    Jemez flood —

    Hungry, we wait for
    carne adovada.

    Ultimately, when reviewing my notes, I don’t find a single disliked poem, or piece that seemed out of step with the broader collection. Psalms from the Badlands is not just an example of exceptional writing, but also a masterful demonstration of how to organize a poetry collection.

    As I write this review, I think of recent discussions over at the Poetry Pea podcast about what makes haiku different from short-form poetry that resembles haiku. For those who are interested in that broader discussion, I recommend this book as a way to further one’s understanding of what makes a haiku poem versus a short-form poem inspired by haiku. I do see many elements of haiku in these poems, including shasei (sketch from life) and the sense of a haiku moment. On balance, though, these poems contain more non-haiku elements. That is not a criticism; Hosho McCreesh himself acknowledges that these are not haiku. Yet I think there are short poems that can teach us what haiku is even if they are a different type of poem, and Psalms from the Badlands is full of worthwhile examples. 

    Beyond haiku enthusiasts, I recommend this collection to anyone who has a deep and abiding love for Southwest landscapes and literature. I had the pleasure of reading this book while on a recent trip to Albuquerque, and I loved the way these tiny poems helped me further appreciate the vastness of my surroundings. This is also an excellent collection for anyone who loves the ways in which short-form poems in general can be a catalyst for poetic, environmental, or spiritual insight.

  • The Best of It: Late May Edition

    The Best of It: Late May Edition

    1. Being honored with a 2025 Soulard Star award at this year’s membership party.
    2. The success of this year’s rummage sale.
    3. It’s iced tea season.
    4. The Roaring exhibition currently running at the St. Louis Art Museum.
    5. Getting to show Texas friends around the neighborhood.
  • Haiku Girl Summer is taking submissions!

    Haiku Girl Summer is taking submissions!

    Haiku Girl Summer is officially open for submissions! The window is a little shorter this year; submissions are now only open until August 15th. However, that’s still 3 solid months to get work in, and you can submit up to 3 times during the cycle.

    Please submit 3-5 haiku or senryu using the form here: https://forms.gle/foXpvuaS19jHcyaR8

    I’m also excited to have the following guest editors lined up:

    • Jessica Allyson
    • Kathryn Haydon
    • Jennifer Gurney
    • Lakshmi Iyer
    • Kimberly Kuchar
    • Lorraine A Padden
    • Kelly Sargent
    • Vidya Shankar
    • C.X. Turner
    • Caroline Wermuth
    • Katherine E. Winnick

    2025 guidelines are available here: https://haikugirlsummer.substack.com/p/submission-information. I’ve just made a few changes, mostly on the housekeeping side. Please note the definition of “previously published” for this journal, and also note the AI statement.

    The biggest reminder: poems should not contain the word “summer.” The goal is to convey the season using descriptive language rather than naming it directly.

    I look forward to seeing your 2025 poems!

  • The Best of It: Mid-April Edition

    The Best of It: Mid-April Edition

    1. The Spare Parts podcast
    2. Getting a better china cabinet for my teacup collection (for a good price at an estate sale, no less)
    3. Seeing how much fun Maybelle has at Grateful Pets
    4. The banh mi at Truc Lam
    5. Getting a new furnace in the off-season
  • Haiku Girl Summer Returns Soon!

    Haiku Girl Summer Returns Soon!

    While Frogpond is keeping me busy, I couldn’t let 2025 go by without a third year of Haiku Girl Summer. I adore running this journal!

    As with the past two years, the journal starts on June 1st and ends on September 1st. (I used September 1st as a surprise bonus post for the past two years, but that caused confusion last year, so now I’m just making it an official part of the run.

    In order to have poems ready for June 1st, submissions open on May 15th. I can’t wait to see your summer haiku and senryu!

    I enjoyed the different perspectives that the guest editors brought to the journal last year. Although I haven’t set up a formal sign-up system yet, I would love to work with guest editors again. If you’re interested in taking part, you can reach me at allyson@allysonwhipple.com.

    Please note that I have updated the guidelines for 2025, including a change to the submission period. Please review the updated guidelines here: https://haikugirlsummer.substack.com/p/submission-information

  • The Best of It: This is 41 Edition

    The Best of It: This is 41 Edition

    1. Going to brunch at Nadine’s Hash House with some of my favorite neighbors.
    2. That I share a birthday with one of my neighbors.
    3. My birthday buddy having a fabulous party that encouraged us to get fabulous.
    4. Ending the night at Stew’s with my brunch friends.
    5. The chance to attend a baseball game.
  • A Buson Challenge Reading List

    A Buson Challenge Reading List

    The day before my birthday, I completed a second round of the Buson Challenge. This time, I had friends joining me via email, Discord, and WhatsApp. Though I had a bigger group of writing buddies, this go-around was a bigger struggle than last year. Winter is not my most creative time, and the state of the world really has me down. Plus, my job is intense (and I’m unhappy in my current role). There’s been a lot weighing on my mind, and that never makes for a smooth writing experience.

    But the point of the Buson Challenge, for me, is that it’s a time-bound period in which you commit to showing up no matter what. And as always, such a big project reveals new insights. I’m still pondering some of the ideas that surfaced for me, so more on those later. But I did want to share the reading list I used this time around.

    I didn’t go into Round 2 expecting to come up with a reading list. But as I was communicating with my fellow writing buddies, I often found myself referencing texts I thought would be helpful. Many of these are reference texts or educational essays; some are more general writing advice. But they all served a purpose in some way. Some of them might seem out of place for a haiku challenge. I certainly was surprised to find myself reaching for a handbook on metrical verse in Week 2! But when creative intuition calls, you follow.

    Almanacs and Saijiki

    The Old Farmer’s Almanac (use the one for the current year)

    Haiku World: An International Poetry Almanac by William J. Higginson

    A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods by Jane Reichhold. (Available as a PDF at https://thehaikufoundation.org/omeka/items/show/1798)

    The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words by Kenkichi Yamamoto (Available as a PDF at https://thehaikufoundation.org/omeka/items/show/821)

    Haiku Scholarship

    “A Definition of Haiku” by Michael Dylan Welch (Available here: https://www.graceguts.com/essays/a-definition-of-haiku)

    “Fragment and Phrase Theory” by Jane Reichhold (Available here: https://thehaikufoundation.org/omeka/items/show/781)

    “Beyond the Haiku Moment: Bashō, Buson, and Modern Haiku Myths” by Haruo Shirane (Available here: https://thehaikufoundation.org/juxta/juxta-1-1/beyond-the-haiku-moment-basho-buson-and-modern-haiku-myths/)

    Poetry Pea S7E33: Madku Workshop with Bona M. Santos. Available here: https://poetrypea.com/s7e33-madku-featuring-west-coast-poet-bona-m-santos/

    Additional Resources

    Rules for the Dance: A Handbook for Writing and Reading Metrical Verse by Mary Oliver

    “Belief and Technique for Modern Prose” by Jack Kerouac (Available here: https://writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88v/kerouac-technique.html)

    Bernadette Mayer’s list of journal ideas and writing experiments: https://www.writing.upenn.edu/library/Mayer-Bernadette_Experiments.html 

    Natalie Goldberg’s 7 Rules for Writing Practice from Writing Down the Bones (Available as a PDF here: https://lauradavis.net/wp-content/uploads/2020/04/Rules-of-Writing-Practice.pdf)

    “The Etiquette of Freedom” by Gary Snyder from The Practice of the Wild. (Available as a PDF here: https://bewildrewild.org/wp-content/uploads/The-Practice-of-the-Wild-by-Gary-Snyder.pdf)

  • The Best of It: Spring Has Sprung Edition

    1. First fish fry of the season at the Soulard Legion!
    2. The first fish fry turning into another night of Soulard revelry
    3. Designing and ordering my “Fish Fry A-FISH-ionado” t-shirt even though the season already started. (Better lat than never . . .)
    4. It’s nice enough to walk Maybelle regularly
    5. The sandwiches John makes me for lunch
  • Sunday Sharing: At the Start of Spring

    I think spring is finally here to stay in St. Louis! I know March can be finicky, but the current weekend weather gives me hope.

    I had two haiku appear in print in the past few weeks! First, I made my first appearance in Mayfly. Although my copy hasn’t arrived yet, my dad got his copy, so I know it’s out. Since I can’t show a photo, this is my piece:

    anniversary
    the faded red canvas
    of our camping chairs

    I also had two pieces appear in Trash Panda, which is my favorite haiku journal.

    Finally, I was thrilled to discover that I received an honorable mention in the February 2025 Kukai at The Haiku Foundation!